Much of life results from choices we make. How we meet every circumstance, and also how we allow those circumstances to affect us dictates our life. In Marian Minus’s short story, “Girl, Colored," we are given a chance to take a look inside two characters not unlike ourselves. As we are given insight into these two people, their character and environment unfolds, presenting us with people we can relate to and sympathize with. Even if we fail to grasp the fullness of a feeling or circumstance, we are still touched on our own level, evidencing the brilliance of Minus’s writing.
In the exposition of the story, Minus immediately delves into the characters, introducing us to both and young Carrie Johnson and Mrs. Cado P. Clark, the main characters in the story. She also gives us a physical description of Carrie, as well as a beginning presentation of Mrs. Clark’s character. Of Carrie, Minus writes, “…Carrie had come out of the South, the red clay clinging to her misshapen heels, made migrant by the disintegration of a crumbling age” also “Carrie’s wide brown nostrils...”(Girl, Colored 1940). Of Mrs. Clark’s character as person from the upper class; she writes “A pale blonde woman opened the door. Wisps of inoffensive hair strayed from the leather thongs of a dozen curlers set at variance on her head.”Minus instantly offers a feel for how each character will shape up to be, and presents a chance for us (the reader) to attach ourselves to these perhaps not-so-unique individuals. Without further ado, Minus expounds on her both her characters initial descriptions of throughout the remainder of the story. We learn that Carrie has a quick temper and she easily angered but manages to keep of her emotions under control, Mrs. Clark has a very unwelcoming demeanor. Mrs. Clark’s expectations for Carrie are extremely high however her perception of Carrie is very low. Carrie emotions are up and down throughout the rest of the story.
Mrs. Clark needs someone to clean, help with the cooking, look after the baby, and do general things about the house. Mrs. Clark continuously reminds Carrie that if she has a problem with duties being asked of her Mrs. Clark can always find a German girl. Even if we are not completely like the character Carrie, we able to relate in some ways because her character helps us to identify ourselves wither in some way.
Marian Minus’s ability to define character and produce an effect in the reader is not limited only to the description and action provided in the story. She expertly weaves location and setting into the development of theme. Setting is essential if the reader is to be given the opportunity to glimpse a truth about the internal life from the characters and the...