Provide an appropriate title and an interesting opening paragraph to appeal to your stated audience (appeal with logic, ethics, or emotion).
Is it fair for one person, just seventeen years of age or younger, to be tried in a juvenile court, receiving a lesser sentence for under than someone who is just 5 months older who committed the same crime? Are juveniles under the age of 18 fully capable of being held responsible for their actions or are all juveniles mentally incapable of realizing their actions will have consequences? When you turn a certain age, you gain certain privileges. You have the ability to purchase certain things, the ability to purchase tobacco products at the local gas station, but most importantly the ability to be held responsible for your actions. To turn a new age every year is great but the age 18 sounds magical right?
2.Include a defensible, relevant thesis statement in the first paragraph. (Revised from Assignment 2)
Juveniles commit terrible crimes just like adults do and therefore no one should be exempt from equal punishment. A crime is a crime and for that reason Juveniles who commit violent crimes should be tried in the same way as adults. If minors who commit violent crimes were tried as adults and punished as adults, the number of violent crimes committed by youths would decline in my opinion. Consequently, in the future the number of violent crimes in general would decline as firmer penalties and punishments would be used to keep violent offenders in prison for longer sentences. Violent crimes can be defined as murder, rape, armed robbery, aggravated assault, larceny-theft and the like depending on state law (pbs.org). According to statistics the number of violent crimes committed by people under the age of 18 has declined since its peak in 1994 (pbs.org).
3.Describe the history and status of the issue and provide an overview of the problem(s) that need to be addressed. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.
In general, however, it can be argued that violent crimes will decrease if a tougher penalty is assessed based on the juvenile being tried in adult court. The transfer to adult court whether it is automatic or requires legal review should be available in all cases of violent crimes committed by people in their teenage years. If these young people are committing adult crimes using adult methods such as guns and other means of violence, they should expect to be tried as adults (Collier). It is only logical to say that the juvenile has engaged in adult behavior and has declared him or herself an adult in crime. The states and/or federal government should see that as a signal that the person should be treated as an adult in the eyes of the court.
4.Explain the first problem (economic, social, political, environmental, complexity, inequity, ethical/moral, etc.) and provide support for your claims. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.
To this suggestion, many people would make the argument that...