Should the Death Penalty Be Abolished In China? --OUTLINE
Student name: Brian Date: Oct 25th Class Time: 2.p.m
Paragraph 1: Introduction
Background: Many Western countries have abolished the death penalty, more and more people propose that China should abolish the death penalty, too.
Thesis Statement: It isn’t the right time for china to abolish the death penalty.
Paragraph 2: Body Text 1
Topic Sentence: The purpose of penalty is to make the criminals truly aware of their sins and begin to repent. The death penalty is the final punishment when other methods don’t work.
Supporting idea 1: Takayuki Fukuda’s murder
Supporting idea 2: Bai Baoshan’s murder (case 3 of World Criminal Investigation in 1997)
Link Sentence: just the topic sentence of text 2
Paragraph 3: Body Text 2
Topic Sentence: If the death penalty abolished, the evils like Takayuki Fukuda and Bai Baoshan would not get the punishment they deserve. In other words, it’s not fair for the victim and their family.
Supporting idea 1: Takayuki Fukuda’s murder (the announcement of the victim’s husband)
Supporting idea 2: Zabhullah Boota’s sexual assault case
Link Sentence: the above is the sides of the criminals and victims, the following is the social situation of china
Paragraph 4: Body Text 3
Topic Sentence: According to China’s current national conditions, China shouldn’t abolish the death penalty now and in the near future.
Supporting idea 1: From the cultural perspective…….
Supporting idea 2: From the economic perspective…….
Only when the social civilization has highly developed, would the death penalty be abolished.
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
The death penalty shouldn’t be abolished in China, but at the same time, the scope of the death penalty should be limited to violent crimes, and the death penalty should be strictly examined.
The death penalty shouldn’t be abolished in China
Death penalty is one of the oldest punishments in the world, it means end of criminal’s life by law. Nowadays, the issue of whether the death penalty should be abolished in China is still a controversial topic. Many people think death penalty is a bad way to punishment criminals because this method violates humanitarianism and it’s also a bit cruel. Besides, two of third countries in the world have...