ESSAY PART ONE: THESIS
I. Introduction paragraph
A. Thesis Statement
Over the centuries, the African people have endured many trials, obstacles, and tribulations. From the moment that they were kidnapped from their homeland, and had been savagely placed in the cargo holds on ships to be sold into slavery to the American people, the Africans (now known in the United States of America as African Americans or Black people) have journey far to achieve, as well as, accomplished what was thought to be the impossible. These things include but are not limited to, freedom, equality, independence, the right to vote, a fair education, a wider range of occupations to pursue, politics, but most of all, to live a better quality of life. For this assignment, the primary focus will be based upon what black people have done in the land of the United States of American to either limit or bring to an end segregation, discrimination, and isolation to receive equality, as well as civil rights.
ESSAY PART TWO: THESIS ARGUMENT
II. Body paragraph #1 - Topic Sentence #1
Slavery or slave labor was an event that began in the soon-to-be new land of the United States of America in 1619, when the first English colony received their first shipment of African people that they were forced to become their servants.
A. Supporting Evidence
In the beginning of slavery, it has been recorded in history that 20 enslaved Africans were delivered to a colony in Jamestown, Virginia. The people of the English colony need them to establish a system of labor exploitation.
Although the system of slavery has existed since the great ancient civilization of Egypt, Rome, Aztec, and various other countries, there was nothing new about the labor exploitation system. Just as during the ancient time, the African captives experience the same demeaning and abusive treatment, for the personal benefit of whom they were brought from or sold to.
C. So What?
The enslaved African people were now force to work on plantation. They were abusively held responsible for the growth and production of crops such as: sugar, cotton, tobacco, rice. They were also held responsible for the care of the farm animals that lived on the plantation.
III. Body paragraph #2 - Topic Sentence #2
Many of the white people during that time demoralized blacks, because they felt that blacks were morally and intellectually inferior a specie of the human race.
A. Supporting Evidence
Back then, white people felt that blacks were not fit for freedom and should be looked upon as hostile beings. They felt that all slaves needed to be controlled.
For example, they used methods of violent beatings, mind control, manipulation, rape, murder, harsher restrictions, dividing families, creating the illusion of fear, and distrust. They have even gone as far as to turn young and old; dark skinned and light skinned; tall and short slaves...