This website uses cookies to ensure you have the best experience. Learn more

The Waiting Room Creative Writing Essay

996 words - 4 pages

The waiting room was still and quiet except for the hypnotic tick of
the old plastic clock hanging on the wall. A smell evoking images of
latex gloves and mouthwash hung in the air, as the dentist worked
behind the closed door. The little boy across the room fidgeted
uncontrollably while his mother chose to ignore it. Her face was drawn
and pale. Her hands were placed on top of her lap and she wrung them
continuously. She wore baggy red patterned trousers, a multi-coloured
striped jumper and on her head was a faded red bandana, firmly sealed
over a mass of scruffy brown curls. The child’s brown hair stuck out
in all directions. His coat was dated, his tracksuit bottoms gathered
around his ankles, and his black shoes hung of his feet with the
frayed laces draping downwards.

The white washed walls in the waiting room revealed not a spot of
dirt. The navy carpet was woven and the red seats were covered in a
plastic ‘ wipe clean’ material. Eyes delivered across to the large
wooden door as the silver handle turned. The door creaked open and out
stepped the dental nurse. She was young, tall and slight. Her ponytail
hung over one shoulder, her cheeks were blushed red, mascara made her
eyelashes look like spiders legs and her lips were tinted pink. The
nurse looked down to her note pad and called, “Miss Mines, if you’d
like to come through, the dentist is ready.” The lady with the odd
attire stood up and with her little boy in tow, took a deep breath and
walked slowly towards the door.

The door to the dentist’s room quietly shut and whispers swept across
the waiting room.

“Did you see the state of that little boy, how could his mother leave
him to get like that.” Bickered to elderly women in the corner.

“I heard she’s going to court for benefit fraud, claiming the little
boy had an illness she was,” the two secretaries behind the desk

Slowly, the gossip calmed and again the only noise in the waiting room
was the hypnotic tick of the clock. Minutes passed by and it wasn’t
long before the scruffy lady and her little boy stepped out of the
dentist’s room and made their way to the secretary’s desk. The
secretary looked up. “Can I help you?” she enquired. The lady didn’t
answer but gazed out of the window behind the desk; her big brown eyes
were shallow and empty. Her little boy began to tug on her jumper,
“Mummy…the lady…Mummy!” The mother soon...

Find Another Essay On The Waiting Room- Creative Writing

"The Room" - A creative writing piece for my high school English class

817 words - 3 pages . They overlapped each other, confusing me.I banged at the window, "What do you want with me? Let me out!"No one paid me any attention. I retreated away from the window. I took a few steps back and started to pace around the little room. It irritates me, all the whiteness. Even when I close my eyes, I can feel it surrounding me. Boom, boom, boom. I could feel a soft pounding building up in my head. I hated it. I looked at the window. Hate

The House- Creative Writing Essay

766 words - 3 pages up; concealing the room I had come to see. My vision momentarily flittered over the incongruous, gaudily coloured car that had brought me so far, but there was no turning back; not now, not ever. I closed my eyes, took a deep breath and picked my way across the uneven path and up towards the front door, stumbling once or twice but never faltering. The door was hanging off its hinges; there was no need for a key. I

Creative Writing: The Machine

4092 words - 17 pages Vineet Velagandula Creative Writing The Machine Milo We’re almost there! A new land, a new start. It’ll be perfect Milo, a new life, where we are free to do as we please. Milo scraped the damp stones with his shoe, scowling at the mold growing in orderly rows between the gaps. The light was dim, but in reality, it was nonexistent. Mr. Nemitz rambled on about Old Town, and how the new city would be even better. “--and it was bright and

Elizabeth Bishop's One Art and The Waiting Room

1319 words - 6 pages Waiting Room” (A speaker describing her experience as a young girl reading the National Geographic magazine, taking place on February 1918). Elizabeth implicitly used the two poems to demonstrate how people are connected through their own vulnerability. Everyone has emotions to certain images or certain situations in life. These emotions can make a person terrified of what they truly feel. In “One Art” Elizabeth begins the poem, “The Art of

Creative Writing: The Final Journey

1036 words - 5 pages . “Please remove all sharp items, liquids, and flammable or explosive substances before entering security” blares a nasal, robotic voice from a speaker somewhere in the room. I shudder. What if security has found it? But they can’t have – we disguised it so well back in Peshawar. Has there been a delay? The dread creeps through me like an icy chill. But there’s nothing I can do; nothing but wait and listen to the incessant chugging of the luggage

Photography within the World of Creative Writing

1432 words - 6 pages The purpose of this essay is to integrate the photographic process with creative writing. At first glance, one might think that the two mediums do not have much common ground. However, upon further scrutiny, one quickly discovers that is not entirely the case. Photography plays a wide and diverse role in creative writing. When I first sat down to write this article, I was focused on the other prompt. After a few days of flipping through

Creative Writing: The Story of Angel

1265 words - 6 pages she saw a huge cloud of smoke surrounding the house in which she and her uncle lived. Angel was speechless and abashed to the point that she felt she would faint. Waiting for no time at all, Angel ran as fast as she could close enough to where she could see her uncle being carried into the ambulance. Uncle Joe was in critical condition where all there was to do was pray and wait. At the waiting room was Angel almost catching some sleep until a

Creative Writing: The Chance of a Lifetime

2049 words - 9 pages later he hands me the roses and says, “Hey, I, uh, was able to, uh, make it after all,” he’s in a cute nervous tone, “these are for you.” I smile and reply, “Well, let’s go in, shall we?” “We shall.” he smiles some more. Inside the lobby, we encounter a large crowd, and it’s more than a little hot and stuffy. I look at Xavier and say, “bathroom” before dashing off around the corner into the ladies’ room. As I’m standing in front of the large

Please Don't Feed the Monkeys- Creative Writing

2443 words - 10 pages , and medicine that we need. Also we have the amount of food that we eat on average each day. There are signs saying things like: “Please watch your head, steps!” “Floors cleaned twice a day, slippery ground.” “Please don’t put hands inside cages”(the reason they have this one is because one of my companions grabbed a man’s arm in a plea for help, but pulled too hard, and dislocated his shoulder) “Do not step past the white line.” But the one that is everywhere around the room, in big black on white, bold writing is: “PLEASE DO NOT FEED THE MONKEYS.”

Severe consequences of miscommunication in The Jungle and “In the Waiting Room”

1834 words - 8 pages . Also, in the short story, “In the Waiting Room”, David Sedaris explores consequences due to his personal language barrier in his time in Paris. He explores different incidents he has experienced due to little knowledge about the French language. Even though consequences arise from his misfortune, Sedaris turns his personal stories into humorous stories. Thus the approach Sedaris takes lowers the severity of the consequences and makes the story

My Modernization of Poe's Cask of the Amontillado. Creative Writing

1930 words - 8 pages on getting him back for what he had done.         Monty was never a really violent or creative person, so it took him a good long while to finally derive a plan that would be nothing but flawless. Getting Freddy's attention was the main issue, and this was the hardest aspect of the procedure. He spent many nights just trying to think of possible ideas that could lure his old roommate into his trap, until it finally came to him; cars. He

Similar Essays

Room 101 Creative Writing Coursework Essay

3515 words - 14 pages Room 101As he sat stiff backed and upright in the hard wooden chair, Jotham looked around anxiously. He could only see three of the walls, and the ceiling, if he craned his neck upwards, but that was enough to make him very uneasy indeed. They were grey and bare - not silver grey, but a horrible murky grey, that made it seem like everything was closing in on him. The room was rectangular; not at all wide; there was perhaps a metre between him

The Waiting Room Essay

1267 words - 5 pages The Waiting Room When I was seventeen and in my senior year at high school, my mom had surgery to remove a malignant brain tumor. After the tumor was discovered, I prayed and cried myself to sleep every night. That spring I learned a little about death and about how I wanted to live my life.The doctors had decided that my mom needed to undergo intense radiation therapy which consisted of twenty minutes of radiation directed at the cancerous area

In The Waiting Room Essay

1395 words - 6 pages I wake up in a waiting room. Six blue seats on either side of the room lined perfectly. I’m in the one farthest to the entrance of the room, I am the only one here. I look to my side to see an old stereo on a coffee table with a trashcan underneath. A door leading to a bathroom is next to the table. This whole place seems odd, how did i get here? what am i doing here? The room is lit with fluorescent bulbs, cheap floating ceiling is everywhere

The Waiting Room Essay

1421 words - 6 pages Peter Nicks and William Hirsch’s 2012 documentary film, The Waiting Room, follows the lives of patients, doctors, and staff in a hospital in California. The hospital is a safety net hospital meaning that it provides care to low-income, uninsured populations. The documentary examines the obstacles faced by people who live without healthcare in addition to showing the public what goes in a safety net hospital. The Waiting Room fits into the finger